Comments on: Is This Poem Any Good…?

By: Hold On<3

Wed, 30 Sep 2009 14:56:12 +0000

Wow, that poem is really good. Your really good at rhyming and keeping the poem flowing, great work.

By: anautumn

anautumn — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 14:52:26 +0000

The poem seems too dependent on the rhyming. It is a bit too “telly” as well. Remember: show; don’t tell.

By: I wanna be a beach bum

I wanna be a beach bum — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 14:11:03 +0000

good one

By: Katiie-x

Katiie-x — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 10:16:22 +0000

Yerrp

By: @ndii

@ndii — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 03:23:08 +0000

great poem, fancy posting http://www.poetrysamateur.wordpress.com/
just put it in the box and post.

By: ♪RaeRae♫

♪RaeRae♫ — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 01:29:18 +0000

it was good, it flows well and kept me reading. that’s the most important thing to writing. you also know when to stop, then start again. letting the reader have a chance to really take in the poems power and strengths.
♥♥good job!!♥♥

By: oh!gravi

oh!gravi — Tue, 29 Sep 2009 20:10:41 +0000

wow thats pretty cool